STUDENT DIRECTIONS: The sentences below contain vague, dull, and non-descriptive words and phrases. Rewrite each sentence with better word choice. Remove the vague vocabulary and replace it with words that are more precise and descriptive.
EXAMPLE: The room did not smell good.
REVISION: The science lab reeked of something hideous and rotten.
SPECIAL NOTE FOR THE TEACHER: If your students need a hint, underline the words you want them to change.
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